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This is very much in keeping with the idea of Peter Blake and his fairy paintings. By taking the image of a youthful figure (in this case my daughter) I have transformed her image in a similar way to Blake. Whether this would be an image she would approve of , probably not . But it was just an idea I wanted to explore. I need a bit of artistic license here.
What Have I achieved? I suppose I have actually gained a bit more confidence in painting portraits. Having worked out the proportions, the triangle of the face and getting that right. The likeness became more apparant, and it became easier to tell what was and wasn't right. Painting children or young adults is harder in one repect as there seems to be less character to the face . There are no real defining lines. Older faces often tell a story, the life of the sitter is very much etched out on their face with the laughter lines or the worried furrowed brow.
Using a paint that I am not used to working with pushed me even harder. I love the blending qualities of oil paint, though the drying time was both a blessing and a curse. Portrait painting as a whole is one of the subjects that does least interest me, so I am glad i have had to try it and I am fairly pleased with the result, but I can't envisage myself ever calling myself a portrait painter.
Having seen some of the more contemporary portraits from the National Portrait Gallery, I am considering cropping the painting . I have seen several portraits where the head fills the entire canvas and there is no space, the impact is really striking and it is something that I may consider. i am not going to crop it straight away as I need to be truly sure it would be a good move. I have cropped the images on photoshop and I quite like them, but it would mean losing some of the flower details, but I guess that is work in progress.
My tutors comments weren't nearly as harsh as I thought they might be, regarding this painting. One major fault that I actually noticed myself when I looked at the painting again with fresh eyes is the allignment of the ear. It is too far down, its obvious now and I could kick myself for not noticing before, but when a work is challenging it is easy to become somewhat blind to obvious mistakes. I will need to look at this again.
I have also used photoshop to darken the image, as I feel this may be of some benefit. I want to see what it looks like first cropped and darkened before I make the final alterations.
